Your writing is superb. It is as if I am trudging along beside you two on your journey of discovery. I hear the birds, taste the coolness of the water from the brook, I smell the evergreens and I even feel the cold comfort of the rock wall as you sit to ponder your future. A magnificent adventure indeed!
Wow. Powerful images of your adventure, both visual and through your descriptive words. I felt I was right there with you, as Donna said.
Your writing is superb. It is as if I am trudging along beside you two on your journey of discovery. I hear the birds, taste the coolness of the water from the brook, I smell the evergreens and I even feel the cold comfort of the rock wall as you sit to ponder your future. A magnificent adventure indeed!
This description of your perspective is exactly how I would have described it. Thank you for so clearly capturing this lovely shared adventure!